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Squallmuzza

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Another piece written about a certain guy that messed me around quite a bit. I had a fun time growing up :D

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What if I took what I gave?
And your sparkling eyes didn't make me weak to your every demand?
What if you didn't fuel me?
And every day apart served only to make me even stronger?

But I'll never give up trying
Cause you're everything to me
You make me go weak
With the slightest affections

Once nothing would stop me
Now you're that which blocks my path to paradise
This through your deceit
And your belief that everyone's pawn to use in your game

What if you blessed me
By simply sparing me affections as hollow as your heart?
What if 'i love you'
For once in your life meant more than 'you'll do for now'?

I'm sorry if my heart
Is too small a price tag for your pitiful love
It's all I truly have
But even if it's attached to me, my heart's owner is you

If I sold myself cheap
So be it, I know what I want and it's a small price
Your barbs cut deep
But none as truly deep as the pit of despair you dropped me in

I hate you...... but I miss you
 
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Squallmuzza

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I'll look her up some day. Thanks for the tip! And ooooh an MA! I'm guessing you're more into the story/scripty writing side of things rather than poetry? Or just in the analysis of literature??

Thanks for the compliments too ^_^
 
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Squallmuzza

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Feel free to analyse away! And don't worry about just PMing the results, feel free to post them here =). I've got a very thick skin so I very much doubt I'll be at all offended.

I know what you mean by defining poetry. I mean just from my perspective, my work never follows any real rules or boundaries. It's probably closer to prose than poetry but feels right as posting it as poetry.

Love the piece you posted as well. It's so convoluted for such a simple and short piece. But even in it's complexity, you really get the feeling come through overall. Love it :D
 
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