My comic "Go Comic Guy" updates

Hello everyone,for open this thread i share with you the first volume of "Go Comic Guy!", a sexual comic with some histories of gay erotism. I hope you like it.
Comment please, i'm the illustrator and creator.

The oficial web is open for you.
http://anon.projectarchive.net/?http://go-comicguy.blogspot.mx/

No one so far with commentary .... no?, okay then I will begin.
First and foremost I want to congratulate you "thecomicguy" with the courage that you have to post own work, it is not always obvious.
I have watched your ilustrations and find they reveal a personal style and the script is kept simple.
I think you have some more storyturn and dramatic to insert but you are not (yet) Oliver Frey ... it will be fine.
Groomed drawings and a nice layout.
Maybe to post your illustrations on a larger format.
Do further and you certainly do not be discouraged you know "the best helmsmen are ashore" ... a saying from us.
As quickly traveled away and back to your blog ... nice, I hope to see more of you.
As a gift an illustration from "Roza's catwalk of fornication" elsewhere in this forum.
Greetings.

Volume 2

Hi, this time I upload the Volume 2 of the comic, the stories are different but will be continued with the publication of more volumes.
This titled "Bad attitude with Axell" and i hope you enjoy it.
comment and be happy.
see you !

Nicely done, simple and pretty straightforward. I like your lining, smooth. Maybe next time you could try with more complicated story with some plots and twist here and there. Well, that if you wanna make more interesting comic than a comic strip in a newspaper. And try to add some light and shadow effect so your drawing could look more alive and not too flat. The using of more specific pattern and texture could help building the environment of the story too.
You've been drawing for sometimes do you? I can tell by the constant neatness of your drawing. The proportions of all the elements in it. Neat. I think you can be a pro, lots of potential. Just keep drawing and never satisfied.
Wish you the best.